Two Times Bass Tab

ok, so this is my first bass tab so i hope i do ok. im not 100% sure that this is right.
im tabbing this from the album version. to play the live version, just move everything 
whole step up.

intro
G|--------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|------------------------------------x3------------------------------------|
A|----5----5----5------------3----------------------------------------------|
E|--------------------5-----------------------------------------------------|

Verse

there are 2 parts in the verse, and it goes like this

prt 1
voc. "cant get my mind off your photograph..."

G|--------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|------------------------------------x4------------------------------------|
A|----5----5----5------------3----------------------------------------------|
E|--------------------5-----------------------------------------------------|

prt2
voc. "when i proposed to you, you just laughed..."

G|--------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|-----------------------5--5--5--------3------5--5--5-------3--------------|
A|--5--5--5-------3-----------------5--------------------5------------------|
E|------------5-------------------------------------------------------------|

 |--------------------------------------------------------------------------|
 |--------------------------------------------------------------------------|
 |--5--5--5-------3---------------------------------------------------------|
 |------------5-------------------------------------------------------------|


pre-chorus

voc. "well i call you up on your telephone..."

G|--------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|--------------------------------------------------------------------------|
A|----------------------------17-----------------5--5--5------3-------------|
E|---6--6---5--5-----/18(ring)---18--17--15----------------5----------------|


the chorus is basicly a combo. of verses part 1 & 2 and the pre-chorus. if you listen to 
song, you can figure it out.


there is a part near the end of the chorus where he starts singing over and over;
"dont want to fend from you..." and im pretty sure it goes something like this

G|--------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|--------------------------------------------------------------------------|
A|---5---5---5-------3------------------------------------------------------|
E|---------------5--------6--6---1--1---------------------------------------|


and at the end of the chorus transitioning into the 2nd verse, it goes like this

G|--------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|-------------------x4-----------------------------------------------------|
A|----15/17-----------------------------------------------------------------|
E|--------------------------------------------------------------------------|


ok so thats basicly it, if you have and editing you would like to tell me about that 
be great. enjoy


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